1/23/09 Eclipse
Something else that I wish Bella would do is forget about Jacob. He;s done nothing but bring Bella down. He's always wanting to be with Bella but Bella is Edwards. If Jacob can"t except that Bella loves Edward more than him and that theirs nobody else in the world for her well that's his loss.
1/22/09 Eclipse
I think Bella needs to marry Edward. Well Bella is marrying Edward but I wish she would do it right now!!! Bella you need to marry Edward right now. I know that you need time to tell your dad, and mom, but just forget about them it's just about spending the rest of your life with the one you love. You love Edward right? That's what I thought, you could barely even live without Edward when he left. Also don't forget that it's the only way if you want to become an vampire. Edward is the one for you ,you can take it another step can't you? You can't be scared or are you? Of course not you've pretty much already have almost died what is it now 7 times? You have been face to face with werewolves, and even vampires!!! I know your scared of what your dad will say but just tell him that you don't care what him or anybody else thinks because it's just you and Edward and even Edward's family.
1/21/09 Eclipse
One significant thing that happened in my book Eclipse today is.Today Edward went hunting and Bella made a break with Jacob from school. So now Jacob and Bella were in the garage cleaning off the bikes since they just road them. Then Jacob said to Bella some where in the conversation that they have like three years to hang out. Then Bella said Jake more like three weeks. So Jacob got mad and started shaking.
01/12/09 Mr. McGuire said
I am glad you are enjoying the Twilight books. They are definitely engaging. Good job logging your reading. Please correct the format--red for date and title and underline only the title. Some of your entries are very detailed, some not. Please try to have a complete, detailed paragraph each day. Areas in red need improvement.
2 or C
- Entries have at least one specific detail from the book
- Specific details from book relate to the topic
- One paragraph (several sentences) each day
- Understanding of book demonstrated in journal
- Discusses "So What?", theme, or lesson
- Format is correct
- Daily reading from SSR and home is logged in book journal
- Spelling, punctuation, and capitalization has occasional errors
1/6/09 New Moon
In my book Bella has a lot of opinions about herself, but there is one in particular I would like to tell you. Bella thinks of herself as not good enough at all for Edward. She might be right she might be wrong, but to me she is down right wrong! But then Edward loves her and his family told Bella that she was the best thing that has happened to him. Even though Edward is so handsome,beautiful,strong,fast, and very, very, loving does not mean Bella shouldn't be with him it just means he's that much more.
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1/5/09 by Bree
1.) My first goal is to finish the Twilight before 2010
2.)My second goal is to keep my grades above D's and F's
How I'm going to read the whole Twilight series is by. I'm going to try to read a little bit at a time, but yet still read a certain amount of time every hour. I think that this will be fun for me and very entertaining. I can't wait till I finish reading New Moon which I'm pretty much almost done.
How I'm going to keep my grades up is by. Paying attention in class, and by turning in all of my work on time. I'm also going to stay on task. Keep up with teachers when they ask a question so I will know the answer. I'm going to try to have fun reaching my goal.
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12/17/08 New Moon
Bella faces to many problems! OK, so first of all when this whole entire story started which was in the book Twiilight she did not have that many problem's. But know, oh know there is to many that I can't even count! So it all started when Bella was with Edward and his family playing baseball. While they were playing these three(stupid)vampires were passing by and they heard Edward and his family. as soon as they were about to leave this guy James smelled Bella. So then they had to kill James to keep him from killing Bella. Now in the book I'm reading, New Moon, Victoria comes back and SHE'S AFTER BELLA! Jacob and everybody else that's in the pack(were wolfe's) is helping to keep Bella safe. But the reason Victoria is after Bella is because Edward's family killed James, and Victoria and James were mates. So Victoria figured she should just kill mate for mate. But yet don't forget that Jacob and his other friends are wolf's and they're going to protect Bella. I recommend you better read this book.
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12/15/08 New Moon
On my online journal it was fun. When I told my parents I had hw to do they started yelling at me, because it was late but the thing is that was when my mom got home. I think that my parents enjoyed it, and I really appreciate my parents doing that with me.
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12/10/08 New Moon
One thing that happened in my book today was that Bella figured out that Jake was a ware wolf. This is really important because Jake has "crossed over to the dark side". So do you remember when I said that Sam took Embry away well now he has Jake and it turned into a very scary dude. So my prediction is that Sam has started a wolf pack club, or what ever you want to call it.
Another thing that happened today is that Bella's dad and some other people went out hunting. So that's a very terrible thing because Jake and his so called other friends are wolf's and they've been running around killing people they don't even know. So is that a bad thing if Bella's protecting Jake?
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12/8/08 New Moon
Bella is the main character. Bella is a girl with brown hair that lives in Washington in a little town called Forks. Bella has a lot of friends but two of them are being idiots because Bella did not hang around or talk to them because of the hard time she was and sort of is still going through. Also since I haven't really told you enough about Jacob I am going to tell you about him.
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12/8/08 Mr. McGuire said
Usually the So What is an overall life lesson, or message that is not directly tied to the book. In this book, to me it has to do with the fact that you will always have problems so you might as well face them. Take a look at the blog examples.
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12/4/08 Solla Sollew
Solla Sollew has a message. The message to the book Solla Sollew is that so what, so what the sky's blue. So what theirs a beautiful river. My home is my home and I love it. I may get a few bumps and bruises but hey you can always find so many or maybe just a few reasons to stay. So thats the message I think the book Solla Sollew.
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12/3/08 New Moon
The character Bella face's a lot of problems in the book New Moon. A problem that Bella faced in my book today was that she wanted to stay just friends with this guy named Jacob but he would not let go of her hand. But then you made us stop reading so then I did not get to see what happened next!
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12/2/08 New Moon
A lot of interesting stuff happened today in my book. Today Bella went to Edwards house that Edward USED to live in! What happened was that Edward moved/left Bella because Edward thought Edward was ruining Bella's life. But the thing is Bella loves Edward! So she went to Edward's house to just try to hear Edward's voice in her head again.
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11/18/08 New Moon
New Moon has a lot of stuff happening in it. I predict that in the ending of my book that Edward will end up coming back or else Bella will come find him. I also predict that Edward will end up biting Bella which will end up turning Bella into a vampire. I also predict that Bella and Edward wil end up getting married.
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12/8/08New Moon is a really awesome book. New Moon is the second book of Twilight. I think that New Moon has a lot of details like, for example: I would rather die than be with anybody else but you. But that was said by Bella. Did you know that Bella's real name is Isabella? I hope you end up reading the series of the books Twilight.
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11/13/08 Desire' Said
Bree Twilight sounds like a great book. Are you going to read the rest of the series and see the movie? After I finish my book series i might read Twilight .
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11/13/08 Twilight
My main character is Bella. Bella is a girl that is brave,hard working,nice, and very pretty.She is actually really weird though. She came to Forks so she could see her dad Charley. Now since she's been living with him for a long time she has a lot of friends, such as: Alice.Jessie.Esme.Carlisle,Mike,Jacob and so much more that I can't even count.Oh, and guess how many boy friends she has! She has:1 and his name is Edward! The way I picture Bella is that she has beautiful brown hair,smooth skin,pretty eyes and last but not least a beautiful smile! I could imagine being like Bella it would be so awesome. The way I see it if I was Bella is that I would be funny and try to get good grades and yet I would still hang out with my boy friend. Bella is really lucky and she probably made the best choice of her life coming to Forks, because of Edward.
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11/12/08 Twilight
Twilight is very interesting. In Twilight today Edward took Bella to the prom. So Bella started to cry. She started to cry because she hates to dance.
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11/11/08 Twilight The best part so far
The best part so far in the book Twilight. Is when Edward took Bella to the meadow. Thats the best part so far because thats when Edward and Bella get to spend a romantic day together. Also thats the best part because Edward and Bella kiss!!! I think Bella and Edward were made for each other. The author makes Edward say "theres one thing I haven't tried yet" then he leans in and kisses her. Thats so romantic!
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11/11/08-Bailey M. said-Breann I think that I am going to want to read the book Twilight after you. The reason why I want to read the book Twilight because you make it sound like a really good book.
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1/23/09 Eclipse
Something else that I wish Bella would do is forget about Jacob. He;s done nothing but bring Bella down. He's always wanting to be with Bella but Bella is Edwards. If Jacob can"t except that Bella loves Edward more than him and that theirs nobody else in the world for her well that's his loss.
1/22/09 Eclipse
I think Bella needs to marry Edward. Well Bella is marrying Edward but I wish she would do it right now!!! Bella you need to marry Edward right now. I know that you need time to tell your dad, and mom, but just forget about them it's just about spending the rest of your life with the one you love. You love Edward right? That's what I thought, you could barely even live without Edward when he left. Also don't forget that it's the only way if you want to become an vampire. Edward is the one for you ,you can take it another step can't you? You can't be scared or are you? Of course not you've pretty much already have almost died what is it now 7 times? You have been face to face with werewolves, and even vampires!!! I know your scared of what your dad will say but just tell him that you don't care what him or anybody else thinks because it's just you and Edward and even Edward's family.
1/21/09 Eclipse
One significant thing that happened in my book Eclipse today is.Today Edward went hunting and Bella made a break with Jacob from school. So now Jacob and Bella were in the garage cleaning off the bikes since they just road them. Then Jacob said to Bella some where in the conversation that they have like three years to hang out. Then Bella said Jake more like three weeks. So Jacob got mad and started shaking.
01/12/09 Mr. McGuire said
I am glad you are enjoying the Twilight books. They are definitely engaging. Good job logging your reading. Please correct the format--red for date and title and underline only the title. Some of your entries are very detailed, some not. Please try to have a complete, detailed paragraph each day. Areas in red need improvement.
2 or C
- Entries have at least one specific detail from the book
- Specific details from book relate to the topic
- One paragraph (several sentences) each day
- Understanding of book demonstrated in journal
- Discusses "So What?", theme, or lesson
- Format is correct
- Daily reading from SSR and home is logged in book journal
- Spelling, punctuation, and capitalization has occasional errors
1/6/09 New Moon
In my book Bella has a lot of opinions about herself, but there is one in particular I would like to tell you. Bella thinks of herself as not good enough at all for Edward. She might be right she might be wrong, but to me she is down right wrong! But then Edward loves her and his family told Bella that she was the best thing that has happened to him. Even though Edward is so handsome,beautiful,strong,fast, and very, very, loving does not mean Bella shouldn't be with him it just means he's that much more.
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1/5/09 by Bree
1.) My first goal is to finish the Twilight before 2010
2.)My second goal is to keep my grades above D's and F's
How I'm going to read the whole Twilight series is by. I'm going to try to read a little bit at a time, but yet still read a certain amount of time every hour. I think that this will be fun for me and very entertaining. I can't wait till I finish reading New Moon which I'm pretty much almost done.
How I'm going to keep my grades up is by. Paying attention in class, and by turning in all of my work on time. I'm also going to stay on task. Keep up with teachers when they ask a question so I will know the answer. I'm going to try to have fun reaching my goal.
_
12/17/08 New Moon
Bella faces to many problems! OK, so first of all when this whole entire story started which was in the book Twiilight she did not have that many problem's. But know, oh know there is to many that I can't even count! So it all started when Bella was with Edward and his family playing baseball. While they were playing these three(stupid)vampires were passing by and they heard Edward and his family. as soon as they were about to leave this guy James smelled Bella. So then they had to kill James to keep him from killing Bella. Now in the book I'm reading, New Moon, Victoria comes back and SHE'S AFTER BELLA! Jacob and everybody else that's in the pack(were wolfe's) is helping to keep Bella safe. But the reason Victoria is after Bella is because Edward's family killed James, and Victoria and James were mates. So Victoria figured she should just kill mate for mate. But yet don't forget that Jacob and his other friends are wolf's and they're going to protect Bella. I recommend you better read this book.
_
12/15/08 New Moon
On my online journal it was fun. When I told my parents I had hw to do they started yelling at me, because it was late but the thing is that was when my mom got home. I think that my parents enjoyed it, and I really appreciate my parents doing that with me.
_
12/10/08 New Moon
One thing that happened in my book today was that Bella figured out that Jake was a ware wolf. This is really important because Jake has "crossed over to the dark side". So do you remember when I said that Sam took Embry away well now he has Jake and it turned into a very scary dude. So my prediction is that Sam has started a wolf pack club, or what ever you want to call it.
Another thing that happened today is that Bella's dad and some other people went out hunting. So that's a very terrible thing because Jake and his so called other friends are wolf's and they've been running around killing people they don't even know. So is that a bad thing if Bella's protecting Jake?
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12/8/08 New Moon
Bella is the main character. Bella is a girl with brown hair that lives in Washington in a little town called Forks. Bella has a lot of friends but two of them are being idiots because Bella did not hang around or talk to them because of the hard time she was and sort of is still going through. Also since I haven't really told you enough about Jacob I am going to tell you about him.
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12/8/08 Mr. McGuire said
Usually the So What is an overall life lesson, or message that is not directly tied to the book. In this book, to me it has to do with the fact that you will always have problems so you might as well face them. Take a look at the blog examples.
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12/4/08 Solla Sollew
Solla Sollew has a message. The message to the book Solla Sollew is that so what, so what the sky's blue. So what theirs a beautiful river. My home is my home and I love it. I may get a few bumps and bruises but hey you can always find so many or maybe just a few reasons to stay. So thats the message I think the book Solla Sollew.
_
12/3/08 New Moon
The character Bella face's a lot of problems in the book New Moon. A problem that Bella faced in my book today was that she wanted to stay just friends with this guy named Jacob but he would not let go of her hand. But then you made us stop reading so then I did not get to see what happened next!
_
12/2/08 New Moon
A lot of interesting stuff happened today in my book. Today Bella went to Edwards house that Edward USED to live in! What happened was that Edward moved/left Bella because Edward thought Edward was ruining Bella's life. But the thing is Bella loves Edward! So she went to Edward's house to just try to hear Edward's voice in her head again.
_
11/18/08 New Moon
New Moon has a lot of stuff happening in it. I predict that in the ending of my book that Edward will end up coming back or else Bella will come find him. I also predict that Edward will end up biting Bella which will end up turning Bella into a vampire. I also predict that Bella and Edward wil end up getting married.
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12/8/08New Moon is a really awesome book. New Moon is the second book of Twilight. I think that New Moon has a lot of details like, for example: I would rather die than be with anybody else but you. But that was said by Bella. Did you know that Bella's real name is Isabella? I hope you end up reading the series of the books Twilight.
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11/13/08 Desire' Said
Bree Twilight sounds like a great book. Are you going to read the rest of the series and see the movie? After I finish my book series i might read Twilight .
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11/13/08 Twilight
My main character is Bella. Bella is a girl that is brave,hard working,nice, and very pretty.She is actually really weird though. She came to Forks so she could see her dad Charley. Now since she's been living with him for a long time she has a lot of friends, such as: Alice.Jessie.Esme.Carlisle,Mike,Jacob and so much more that I can't even count.Oh, and guess how many boy friends she has! She has:1 and his name is Edward! The way I picture Bella is that she has beautiful brown hair,smooth skin,pretty eyes and last but not least a beautiful smile! I could imagine being like Bella it would be so awesome. The way I see it if I was Bella is that I would be funny and try to get good grades and yet I would still hang out with my boy friend. Bella is really lucky and she probably made the best choice of her life coming to Forks, because of Edward.
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11/12/08 Twilight
Twilight is very interesting. In Twilight today Edward took Bella to the prom. So Bella started to cry. She started to cry because she hates to dance.
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11/11/08 Twilight The best part so far
The best part so far in the book Twilight. Is when Edward took Bella to the meadow. Thats the best part so far because thats when Edward and Bella get to spend a romantic day together. Also thats the best part because Edward and Bella kiss!!! I think Bella and Edward were made for each other. The author makes Edward say "theres one thing I haven't tried yet" then he leans in and kisses her. Thats so romantic!
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11/11/08-Bailey M. said-Breann I think that I am going to want to read the book Twilight after you. The reason why I want to read the book Twilight because you make it sound like a really good book.
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